Crappy Design

This is a logo for an ice rink called Jaspers' Rink.  This is a crappy design for a few reasons.  The first reason is that the logo has a large bird in the center that has nothing to do with an ice rink other than it is holding a hockey stick.  The second reason is that the logo put more emphasis on the large bird than it does on the name of Jaspers' Rink.  The third reason is because it looks hand drawn and unprofessional.  To make this design better, I will simplify the design and make it look more professional and make it on a computer.  I will also remove the large bird and put more emphasis on the name of the ice rink.